(Re-Write) I fell asleep and awoke in Naruto

Hello Everyone, I've began working on a rewrite for my dreadfully written Naruto Fanfiction, giving it its dues, it was written two years ago. Not saying my writing skills are better, but that's not really for me to decide.

However, I wish to make this to the best of my abilities, so if you have any suggestions about anything that I could tweak or redo, I would love to hear from you.

I was also considering having small OC cameo's for some of the followers of my old book, who stuck through the bad writing for the story, and maybe if I manage to obtain some new followers of this rewrite, I could include them within the story (No follower OC will have a major role, as I already struggle to write with just Ciaran (plus Niki and all those in the later story) so the would be in there every so often, like if one of the OCs own a Ninja Weapons Store I could make Ciaran go shop there etc.)