Acclaimed Souls: D'raikes and Cols'ius
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Last published Thu, Jan 14, 2016
This is the beginning of a story about three best friends who become intertwined in a world full of magic, tragedy and lies.
Whilst on a school trip, one of the three stumbles upon a frozen over house. With the other two not too far behind. Unintentionally they unleash a dormant "evil", that has been asleep for the past 3000 years. During this phenomena they are branded as D'raike, the life-time slaves of the Cols'ius. When you become a D'raike however, you loose every memory of who you are. A singular cursed "blessing" from the Col'ius "demons".
Will you discover the truth behind the lies?
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