Drowning in Madness

Through a strange turn of events, Elias finds himself called to a fantastical world by the name of Wonderland. Accompanied by the unusual girl, Jay, the two must travel in search of the being Time, to restore balance to Wonderland. . (This is the first I've written on here, and I look forward to writing it. I publish one or two chapters at a time, and may put out ten in on day, or not touch it at all for months at a time. I appreciate feedback, negative and positive, though I prefer that instead of saying 'That sucked.' that you'd go more along the lines of 'I felt it lack imagery and character development.')