Unremitting Abuse

Unremitting Abuse

  • WpView
    reads 25
  • WpVote
    Stemmen 1
  • WpPart
    Delen 1
WpMetadataReadLopende<5 mins
WpMetadataNoticeLaatst gepubliceerd zat, jul. 4, 2015
WpInfo
Poëzie
I wrote this poem and submitted it for a poetry competition in January. I found out a couple weeks ago that they decided to pass on my submission. At first I was upset but I think I was more disappointed in my self I felt like I failed myself. I also felt weak. Then it hit me this was the first time in my life that I've ever seen something all the way through and that was a win in itself. I came up with a idea to write a silent short with this poem being narrated. I'm currently talking to a film production company but I haven't secured anything just yet. I still want to release this poem. It's a personal poem, my soul cried in this piece. I hope you enjoy, also I apologize for this long intro. Please leave comments I look forward to hearing feedback. If the production company doesn't want to move forward with this project I'll probably turn it into a story with a bunch of chapters, either way I'll create something worth your time. XOXO Da ArtGod. P.S. I also created the cover. So if anyone needs help with a cover or ideas message me.
Alle rechten voorbehouden
Word lid van de grootste verhalengemeenschapOntvang persoonlijke verhaal aanbevelingen, sla je favorieten op in je bibliotheek en geef commentaar en stem om je gemeenschap te laten groeien.
Illustration

Je bent misschien ook geïnteresseerd in

  • It wasn't my fault
  • JefHalo Story (DISCONTINUED!)
  • Live Outside
  • I'll Be Yours And You'll Be Mine. (simpbur x reader)
  • Stale Words
  • Monsters Inside My Head
  • The Words I couldn't Say
  • DreamxReader

This is a novella I had to write for school and I would like some feed back. EXCERPT Pain is something I've become very accustomed to. Whether I like it or not. It sounds mental though, I know. My biggest fear is being alone, even though I already am. As I walk into the school I see them, my 'friends'. They're sitting in the quad all chatting to one another. I try to turn around before one sees me but I see one waving me over so I'm left with no choice but to go. "Hey guys" I greet them with a shaky voice. So if anyone has feedback for me or just wants to talk comment or message me anytime and I'll get back to you as soon an I can. Also I need a good book cover so if you send me one I'll use it but in the mean time I'll be looking for one.

Meer details
WpActionLinkInhoudsrichtlijnen