Picking Up the Pieces # Zayn Malik/One Direction Fan Fiction-On Hold and Editing

This is the story of Melissa. Her parents just died and she has no where to go except for the orphanage which is called 'Fountain's Youth Adoption Agency'. But while she's there she going to try and forget everything that happened with her family. The story picks up when she's 9 and go on to when she's 14 years old.
One Direction doesn't come in for a few chapters. But she eventually meets them. At first Melissa turns them down but then.... Oops, don't want to give too much out. Read to find out how she meets them.
By the way this is my first fan fiction and I would love it, if you comment to help me continue on with it. I just need feedback. So please give me some. So I know if I should continue working on it. Please!!
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