Star Wars: Turmoil on Talus

This is the first time I ever wrote something close to a book, i don't usually read much. I am writing this because I love the Star Wars universe and once Disney cancelled the Clone Wars, I still thought there were more stories to be told, so I am making them up myself. So, I hope you enjoy this fanfic! Note: this is completely original and it's my first time so excuse the errors! :)