Un-Raiders
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Last published Wed, Mar 6, 2013
"Those are the words I will say when we are over...". Danny Dailn James lost his fiancé, Cindy , in a fire 6 years ago. He had a son, Walle, with her before her death. He has been depressed since her death. One day during a browse on the internet, he finds a video which talks of, ' The Amulet of Murckestu, The Ancient And Lost City'. The video said if you found it, you would have the power to change the universe, and other things. But the one thing he payed attention to mostly was that you could being back the dead. Ever since, he has looked for the Information about the amulet. It had been 4 years now. But what he doesn't know is, he is closer that ever.
Walle Somel James is Danny's 15 year old son who has an 'attitude' with his dad, he blames his dad for his mothers death.
Jack Den Dane is both William's Bestfriend and Brother. He doesn't believe in the Amulet, and he thinks Will is crazy thinking it is real. He only goes because he is scared for his brothers well-being.
William Carpenter Dane is a world known scientist and millionaire. He is known to have a pet-friend monkey named Scarl. He invented a tiny chip which allows Scarl to talk and think like a human. He is a very ambitious man and thinks finding the Amulet will allow him to time-travel.
Walkener Ael Torkinsanañuca is a tour guide who gets trapped with the rest of the crew during a massive storm while taking the crew to a Greek Island. He is mysterious and quite. He loves and cares for his niece,Aspasia.
Aspasia Aldora Torkinsanañuca is Walkener's niece. Her parents died when she was 9 years old. Se loves her Uncle and has a great relationship with him.
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Join The Crew as they go through Greek Islands and past the planet.
A very exciting adventure. I hope you all enjoy this story. I work hard on it and try to add lots of action and humor.
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