A Father's Love

This is my first attempt at creating my own Doctor Who story. I thought I would do it in script form to make it a little easier to follow and just to make it easier for me to write.

Jenny, The Doctor's daughter, finds herself in Cardiff (2009) after falling through a rift in time and space. She is met by what remains of the Torchwood team and Martha Jones. The gang unite together against an old enemy of the Doctor's who have also fallen through the rift and threaten the Earth with invasion. But how will The Doctor react when he discovers his daughter is alive after all?

The story takes place between the episodes 'Planet of the Dead' and 'The Waters of Mars' and between series 2 and 3 of Torchwood.

ALL criticism is welcomed with open arms, don't be polite. I CANNOT BE OFFENDED!