Life in the city

Ariel is a 18 year old girl who hates to party. She's not like other teenagers.
She loves to spend time with her family.
So one day she has to move to America and where she moves to in America is most popular and crowded place ever.... New York City to be exact. And she has to get ready for a life changing experience.

THIS IS MY FIRST STORY I HAVE EVER WRITTEN AND DON'T JUDGE IF SOME SENTENCES DON'T MAKE ANY SENSE OR IF THERE ARE ANY GRAMMATICAL ERRORS I'LL TRY MY BEST TO CORRECT THOSE MISTAKES AND IF YOU ANY PROBLEMS WITH THE WAY I WRITE MY STORY THEN DON'T READ IT AND IF YOU HAVE ANYTHING RUDE TO SAY THEN SAY IT. IM NOT AFRAID OF WHAT YOUR GOING TO SAY.