the twentieth wife

at first I want to say that this is my first story and I hope u like it but don't go so harsh on me and its okay if you find something that if I add to the story you may share with me your idea and English is my second language so I hope that you help me make my stories better and thank u .

here is a description for the story
its talk about a girl and she was poor but of course when you read the story you will find that she won't remember that and her dream was to become a queen and her dream became true and it's a historical Indian story hope u like it