Critique Book

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Parts 3

Reads 523
Votes 27
Parts 3

HINDI ito isang kwento, ito'y isang libro na naglalaman ng kritikismo. Ginawa upang makatulong, magpuna sa tamang paraan. 
Tara't magtulungan! 

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