Mystical
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Ongoing13m
Last published Wed, Sep 16, 2015
Hey guys so this is just a short story that I made about a year ago for my english class (yea lame). It's not very good and there is probably a bunch of grammatical errors since English is my third language. One of the biggest reasons that I uploaded this is because I need feedback. Feedback on what? Well... maybe feedback on my errors BUT ONLY IF YOU WANT TO. I also maybe ummm need help on how to continue the story. I have a bunch of ideas but I want your ideas??? By the way this story was kind of KIND OF based on Supernatural. When I mean based, I don't mean fanfiction. I mean like the myths and legends that are in Supernatural. Also, the sentence starter was required so it's kind of lame but ehhh.
UPDATE-
I will probably most definitely change this into fanfiction since I'm free these few days. I WOULD LOVE HELP! <3
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Summary (shit, not very good at this)-
On a normal Sunday, Thea was just doing her usual Sunday routine which is basically homework, homework, food, procrastinate, homework, food, rest, procrastinate and so on. Just when she was going to bed, she heard a scream from her parents bedroom, her parents were dead. She was upstairs in the bedroom when it happened, well not the whole thing since she blacked out halfway. The police say that it's just an armed robbery but Thea knows that it isn't. She knows that there is something wrong and she is going to find out what happened to her parents and get revenge. However, a shit load of things, things that nature can't explain, happen in the middle of her journey.
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