The Drop
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Ongoing13m
Last published Fri, Jul 10, 2015
This story I wrote a few years ago. I kinda getting into psychological thriller/horror. I think I had just seen Shutter Island and wanted to see Sucker Punch, so you can see the resemblance. It was also built upon a Halloween theme park that I had the idea for, why I don't know. But whatever, please enjoy.
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