The Evil Within: Rewritten
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Last published Sat, Jul 11, 2015
"Why do you always seem so determined to be an angry bitch but then when I glance at you looking at me, you appear shy and scared?" He asked with a smirk. "Do I sense a softie in you?" His smirk didn't leave though he didn't succeed at annoying her. If anything, she seemed thoughtful.
"I'm not a softie," she replied while turning her head to watch the sunset over Krimson City. "Then what are you?" He asked his smirk leaving and his thoughts drifting to what her story was. For a moment she thought, waiting for the sunset to exit before picking the right word.
"I'm damaged," was all that came out of her mouth, she didn't even bother to look back at him before walking away down the street. All he could remember thinking was, 'What happened to her?'
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The story of The Evil Within left out a major character: Danielle Colt. Follow her story from pre-game to post-game.
All characters from The Evil Within do not belong to me. Danielle Colt is an OC.
There will be cursing and gore.
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