Unexpected Young Love (REWRITING)
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Ongoing35m
Last published Sun, Jun 9, 2013
Author's Note: I am rewriting this story. After reading this myself, I find it embarrassing and too cheesy. o.o
Sorry if you have to wait for like, centuries. ):
"Having a boyfriend will ruin your reputation on having a better future. They will distract your education and I won't be able to cope it if I hear you and him playing inappropriately together in your room!" My dad shouted sternly, crossing his arms over his chest as he gave me one of his looks that said, 'Do not argue with me, daughter.'
15 years old Joanne had never been out with someone because well, let's just say her dad strictly didn't like seeing boys with her - even if you could tell they were innocent friends.
But attempting to deal things with her dad wasn't just the problem, she had a best friend who was a traitor, a girl who wouldn't stop being a bitch to her and of course, falling in love unexpectedly with someone.
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