Once an Orphan... Not Always an Orphan

A book I'm writing for my friends: each character is based on one of them, if you read it I hope you like it!
It's about six girls, I would explain more but I wouldn't be able to do it without sounding terribly cheesy and that would stop anyone from reading it. Please try it out though! :)
(Recently I've been editing it, and rearranging chapters so if you are coming back to reading it, then I'm sorry for any confusion :/ I think it works better in this arrangement. Feel free to tell me your thoughts though! ~ Starrella