kidnapped (short story)
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Concluida jue, jul 16, 2015<5 mins
This is a short story I wrote a long time ago for a school assignment. I wanted to share it on here rather than just forget about it.
This story is mysterious and makes your hair stand on end. Please give me any feedback you have.
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