After The Flash trailer & books

please give me your feedback.please don't go to bad on the hate. I'm just trying to see if I'm any good at this.

my name is bill... the year is 2049 and I'm looking for my family. when The Flash, as we call it, happened bill was in new york and his family was in Florida. he has travled many miles to make it back, met many people, and killed many things. the only thing that has kept him going is the thought of being reunited with his family. will he find them and survive this horror, or will he succumb to the one thought that has been tearing at him sense this whole thing started?