Lost In Lagos

I wrote this many, many years ago. It's an unfinished first draft and I thought it would be fun to update it. It's middle grade fiction, but I hope everyone will give it a read.

Here's the premise:

Lost in Lagos: The Mission is Possible Series

From flying bullets to flying bugs, can a twelve-year-old American boy and his sister survive in Africa without their parents or will they be lost in Lagos forever?

Twelve-year-old Chance Starbuck resents leaving his comfortable American life so his parents could become missionaries in Nigeria. When he and his younger sister get lost in the Lagos airport, he has bigger things to worry about. Alone in a foreign country, they battle guards with guns, giant bugs and street gangs all while learning to rely on God to keep them safe until they are reunited with their parents.

Please comment on the story, characters, and writing! This was going to be the first in a series called "The Mission Is Possible." Adventures about two Missionary kids.