Annoying things that are in fanfics
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"As I stared deeply into Harry's orbs-"...... ?? Really .. If you look into the FOUR poster Harry's eyes are not green.....they are turquoise....?
Orbs??? Why?? I understand what your trying to do but... You might as well write a alien fanfiction about Disneys E.T!!
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