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The Criminal
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Ongoing, First published Jul 18, 2015
I walk up the the stairs that lead up the second and third story. I continue up to the third story and up to my old room admiring the beautiful house. As I got to the closed door to my old room I thought about all of the memories I had in here 4 years ago. 

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“J-Jace! N-no s-s-stop,” I tried to say through giggles. Jace sat there straddling my hips tickling my sides laughing.

I started hitting his chest with my hands while laughing. 

“Ow! Ow! Okay, okay! I'll stop!”  He yelled while still laughing at me cause he had found my weak spot. He looks down at me and smiles his gaze then travels down to my lips and I sudden notice how close our bodies are together. We both start slowly moving in then as his soft lips brush against mine one thought crosses my mind. 

Im in love with my best friend. 

Then he crashes his lips to mine. Sparks run through my body as his hands message my sides where his hands still lay. His lips are so soft as he kisses my lips slowly but passionately. He runs his tongue across my bottom lip asking for entrance I open my mouth letting him explore my mouth. We pull away to breathe for a moment. 

“Wow,” we both mumbled at the same time. Then crack up laughing. I love this. I love him. 

“Ivy dinner is ready! Jace your also welcome to stay for dinner tonight,” mom asks. She has always loved jace as her own son. 

We pulled apart quickly and open my bedroom door to only run past mom who was standing at the door and down the stairs. Mom makes the best food so we enjoy it as much as we can. 

(I suck at these things, so don't judge me)

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