Kutaika & Alistair

This is a story I've been working on for years and years. The characters are mostly ones I've used in role-plays with friends over the years to work on development and shaping them out. It is very sci-fi/fantasy based what with shifters and psychic powers and all that fun stuff. It takes place on Earth just about 20 years from now. Scientific progress with human/animal experimentation has reached it's peak. They have succeeded in combining the two into one being. and in doing so, they've also created humans with superior brain power, and sometimes the two things collide in one human making them the absolute most powerful of all beings on Earth. This story is FAR from being completed. I've written 4 pages total and have re-written it multiple times. I'm still working on it very hard. Any and all feedback and constructive criticism along the way would be greatly appreciated! I know it's full of flaws and I'm working on fixing those. However I might not notice everything so please don't hesitate to let me know if things don't make sense or if the words don't flow well! Well, here goes...