Descendants Of The Eclipse

Descendants Of The Eclipse

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So this started out as a short story that I made in my english class. I want to keep on going with the story and see how where it goes. So give me your thoughts. This is about a unnoticeable girl who is part of this world renown family, which she feels like she the odd one out. One day she notices an unfamiliar boy, giving her an unsettling feeling. This leads to a whole series events, but the most important thing is that she reveals a secret about herself. (Honestly I dont know if this is a good summary, but I hope I made it suspensful)
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Okay, so I'm really bad at descriptions so here's my attempt at a small summary: Basically the protagonist of this story is searching for her friends little sister who's gone missing. Her search brings her to an unsavoury location, and the awful weather isn't helping her out much either. As she journeys deeper she soon realises that her suspicions were correct - an old 'friend' has returned, and this time they don't plan on letting our protagonist get away... So how was that? Not a bad attempt in my opinion, although it could be better... Try it out! Hopefully you won't regret it, otherwise - take care!

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