Legend of the Antarians

Legend of the Antarians is a new kind of gaming system that taps into a person's brainwaves to create the ultimate gaming experience. Lucille Hooper is a 15 year old girl who is selected to test the new game. During the trial, an accident happens and Lucille is knocked into a coma, but her conscious is still alive... inside the game. The biggest problem is, Lucille doesn't remember anything about life outside the game and doesn't even know it. She doesn't even realize there is a world outside of the game.

Three years later, Alex Gonzales receives the game for his 18th birthday. He plays the game and is partnered with a girl named Lucille to complete quests. They become friends very quickly, but both seem a little strange to the other. Alex always says weird things that make no sense to Lucille. Lucille doesn't seem to understand the simplest things.

One day, the two are sent to trap a member of a evil guild because he is causing trouble, but there's something strange about this Steven guy. The two find themselves in a conspiracy like no other and in a race against time to return Lucille to real life body and to defeat the league of evil guilds that has risen up against them.

Rated PG-13 for violence and slight language. Possible entry in upcoming Amazon Breakthrough Novel Award Contest so review as much as possible with critiques.

Also, this is copyrighted, so if you try to steal it, I will find you.