The odd one

Hey guys, this is my first story on watt pad and I am still a beginner in writing stories. So please be easy on me as my stories might not be that long. Please comment, vote and give me tips on how to improve my story. Beware that I will not be updating very frequently so I might take a while. Hopefully you will like it:)

My story is about a boy who lives in rough situations and is the odd one of the bunch. He wants to make his dream come to life to become a soccer player. He wants to make his family and especially his father proud who is against soccer. Will he be able to strive for his dream? Can he make his country and his family proud? Can he make himself win?

Thanks, Smilingpuppies.