New York state of mind
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  • Durée 22m
En cours d'écriture, Publié initialement juil. 31, 2015
Jordan Goode is so close to graduation. With one year left of cafeteria food, coffee breathed teachers and endless rumours circling the school she can hardly wait for the end. But what she doesn't expect is to spend her senior year, the year for parties and college applications, in a new city. When her dad decides to get remarried he sends her off to live with her mom in New York City. But going from the small Canadian town of Davidson, Saskatchewan to one of the biggest concrete jungles in the world might be more than a little challenging when she is faced with a school 4 times bigger than what she's used to. Will Jordan have the senior year she thought she would or will it be a total disaster like she expects?

Spencer Anderson is a stereotypical player. Never stays with the same girl for more than a few weeks. But when he meets Jordan he feels something he hasn't felt before. Does Spencer have a crush? He's never stayed with the same girl for very long because he never felt any affection towards them. It was always just lust which faded as soon as he got the girl. Wasn't that the fun? Chasing the girl? Jordan is different though when she smiles he gets butterflies in his stomach. And when she looks at him he can't help but feel happy. But does Jordan feel the same way about him? He's not sure and for once in his life he doesn't know how to ask.
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This is my first story so please critique it as much as you want. I am writing this to improve my writing skills so it would be very helpful if you were to comment on what you like, what you don't, if the flow is off in places, if something feels awkward, please tell me. No need to beat around the bush just give it to me straight.
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