New York state of mind

New York state of mind

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WpMetadataNoticeDernière publication mar., mars 14, 2017
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Romance
Jordan Goode is so close to graduation. With one year left of cafeteria food, coffee breathed teachers and endless rumours circling the school she can hardly wait for the end. But what she doesn't expect is to spend her senior year, the year for parties and college applications, in a new city. When her dad decides to get remarried he sends her off to live with her mom in New York City. But going from the small Canadian town of Davidson, Saskatchewan to one of the biggest concrete jungles in the world might be more than a little challenging when she is faced with a school 4 times bigger than what she's used to. Will Jordan have the senior year she thought she would or will it be a total disaster like she expects? Spencer Anderson is a stereotypical player. Never stays with the same girl for more than a few weeks. But when he meets Jordan he feels something he hasn't felt before. Does Spencer have a crush? He's never stayed with the same girl for very long because he never felt any affection towards them. It was always just lust which faded as soon as he got the girl. Wasn't that the fun? Chasing the girl? Jordan is different though when she smiles he gets butterflies in his stomach. And when she looks at him he can't help but feel happy. But does Jordan feel the same way about him? He's not sure and for once in his life he doesn't know how to ask. ~~~~~ This is my first story so please critique it as much as you want. I am writing this to improve my writing skills so it would be very helpful if you were to comment on what you like, what you don't, if the flow is off in places, if something feels awkward, please tell me. No need to beat around the bush just give it to me straight.
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"Why her? She isn't exactly my type Troy." I said, studying the girl. "Because she looks like a virgin. Are you going to take the bet or not?" He asked. I looked back at the girl and looked her up and down. "You're on." I smirked. He smiled, shaking my hand. I had to get this girl to sleep with me before prom night was over. I looked at the girl. She will be mine. **** Abigail Monroe is a normal teenage girl. It's her senior year and all she wants to do is graduate with a perfect average in all of her classes and not be noticed, but when she meets Jordan, that becomes a little hard for her. Jordan Collins is a popular teenage boy. He's the quarterback of the football team and one of the hottest guys in school. When his friends give him a bet to remember senior year, he takes it, but will he go through with it? Read to find out what happens between Abby and Jordan.

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