The Snow Queen

This is a piece of work that I'm just trying to write, but I thought that getting some critique on here would help, so here it is.

SYNOPSIS:
Imagine a world where you're in a coma your entire life. The government only allows 1 in every 100 babies to stay awake. The rest slip into eternal slumber. They never get to see anything that happens in the real world. Near their deaths, things and people will show up out of place, and they will start to hear their name being called in the distance. This is the story of someone different and special- Genevieve Marie Reed, a girl in a coma.