Alone; yet not alone

okayy so ive never written a storyy , so i have no idea if this is good . let me know . comment & vote pleaseee (:
Melissa is a very smart girl, but things dont always go to gd in her personal life. That is until she meets Angel, the guy who seems a little to perfect which knda scares her. But at the moment she feels she's alone Angel proves her wrong with his ongoing , pure love <3