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Piper, a cute teenage girl, never really fits in with anyone. She's in 12th grade and is just ready to graduate. One day as she's walking into school, a hot stud asks her out. Little does she know that he has a deep dark secret that only a few girls know about but will never talk about.
I need A LOT of feedback on this. I am really unsure about this book. I want to know if I'm going to fast or is he introduced to early. PLEASE feel free to leave anything. I'm thinking about making it 20-25 chapters long and about 260-310 pages long.
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