The Ultimate Chase

The Ultimate Chase

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"Congratulations! You just turned your guard dog into a fucking deer in headlights" I said, but before I could say anything more, I heard a subtle ping inside the car, and I mentally grinned. "Yes. What about you register for yourself and I'll reconsider" I added. "Don't listen to him" Kelvin said. I scoffed. I was about to make a short jest remark about it, when I heard a very gentle and low voice resonating from the inside. "It's okay, Kelvin. Move" It says. Kelvin hesitated at first, but he moved aside, unblocking the door. As he did, the doors of the car lifted upwards revealing a slender figure of a person, wearing vigorous black attire that emphasizes every edge of her curves while still wearing a black helmet painted with splatters of red on the sides. "There's no need for threats, Xavier." She finally said in a very low tone i thought it was just some whispers from the wind. I held my breath and gritted my teeth, trying my best to restrain my anger from going berserk. I suddenly wanted to hit anybody and turn him into an indistinguishable bloody ogre or something savagely whacked! No shit, all along i was racing with a damsel! how did i not notice it? I could feel my jaw inadvertently clenching. Ugh. Who am i kidding, i am not mad about her being a girl! Just....Goddamn it, I think I felt gayish jitters when she spoke my name.
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