The start of life
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Complete, First published Mar 16, 2013
Mothers. 

Yes, we sometimes get angry at them, and sometimes think that  they don't get kids' problems, or whatever, but they do care about you. This poem is to reflect on that. 

It's about how they care on the inside, not how much they nag on the outside. So basically, this poem isn't about coaching people how to be meek and tidy their room or whatever- it is to show the second side of the story.

It's not cheesy or anything, just so you know. It's real.

All advice and comments are appreciated.

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It's just a bunch of songs I wrote when I was feeling mad or sad or extremely happy and motivated. Their just a bunch of lyrics formed from my emotions. I mean I was trying to figure out how to express myself so I started using rhymes to begin with. I mean some songs don't only have rhymes but most of my songs are rhymes with 4 or 6 lines and their all original works of mine so don't bother trying to steal them or anything. Also this is an add on I've started writing journal entries in here as well and I may put my two books together. My 'Ange's Journal', and 'Hidden Feelings' together. I don't know why, it's just a spur of the moment thing and a feeling I had. These are all my experiences and thoughts I've had but never said out loud. But if you don't like it or are offended by what I say your doing something wrong in life. But I guess it's also me just letting everything out and telling my story in an unorganized way, you know.