Aural art

I wrote this poem a while back (and by "while" I mean last week) and I am really proud of it. I really like using language to express myself and I fell that it is perfect. You probably won't understand a lot of the words so I also wrote a simplified version. If I get enough feedback I will publish it too. Also, the poem is written to sound nice. Ergo, it has to be read out loud. Peace...