Spitfire

Spitfire

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Abused for years, young 9 year old Ren finds refuge in the streets of downtown Memphis. Living on the streets by yourself can be a challenge, but she finds strength in some odd characters. After finding an underground fighting arena she gets embedded into a new and exciting world. Danger follows her like a shadow, adventure in every turn, and curiosity sits on her shoulder like the devil. Soon after her first fight things go downhill in her life, how will she move forward? First book out of ??? ( I'm planning at least 3-4) This is the 4th time I have put this story up on Wattpad, but I am going to follow through and put the whole entire story up. With a first installment of 20 chapters, then 5 chapters a week until we get through it. I need beta readers and editors desperately. While this is up on Wattpad I will be working on major revisions and edits. I would like comments on my characters, plots, settings, scenes, grammar, spelling, ect. I expect and want people to rip this apart by the seams and tell me the good, the bad, and the nasty. I will not delete or block a bad review or critique unless it is outright hate and judgmental that just does not need to be around. I really hope you like this as it took me 17 months to write it to completion, and I know it will take many more before it is ready to publish. It originally started as a NaNoWriMo novel, (It may seem like I cheated but I did write 50k in a month). It is currently at around 113,000 words. I hope you like it! Started October 22,2013 Finished March 14,2015 Also if you find anything that looks like an authors note to myself, please alert me and I will edit it out.
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⚠️⚠️WARNING!!! This story contains stories and scenes of sexual harassment/assault, so if any of those topics are sensitive to you, please be careful while reading this story.⚠️⚠️ Virginia finds herself in The Box. She doesn't know anything about herself, where she is, or where she came from. All she knows is that she is trapped in a box, and everything hurts. She's scared, she doesn't remember why she is or why her body is in such pain, all she knows is that nothing good happened when she was still down in that hell below. When the box she's trapped in finally stops moving, she's greeted with an uncomfortable scene: dozens of boys. Virginia was dazed and couldn't make out what was real and what was just her mind making up, but before she could even adjust to the new setting and figure out what was going on, she was scooped up by warm arms and brought outside of her old metal prison, into a new one made of stone and filled with teenage boys. Hi everybody!! This is my first attempt at a Wattpad story!! Please bear with me and give me suggestions as to what I should add or take away. I take inspiration from tessasboredom story "Jealousy," so please check that out; it was absolutely incredible. This story is a Gally x Y/n kind of thing, but instead of y/n, it's a girl named Virginia. I want to hopefully be able to show emotion by saying someone's name, and I feel I will be better able to do that if it is a real name and not y/n. Feel free to think of it as yourself in Virginia's shoes, of course, and please enjoy!!!!! Best Rankings: #1 chuck #1 gally #2 mazerunner

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