Strike It Right (Louis Tomlinson)
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  • Reads 86,494
  • Votes 1,556
  • Parts 36
  • Time 5h 9m
Complete, First published Mar 17, 2013
Did you ever fall for someone you know you shouldn't, Tried hard to fight your feelings but you just couldn't, You fall deeper with each passing day, but tried to hide it in every possible way.

Louis Tomlinson, young handsome man with a passion for singing and football. He spends most of his time going on tours with his band known as One Direction. 

What happens when Louis and his band finally returns home and he is eager to join his local successful football club that is now under the management of a young girl.
At first Louis does not like the idea of a girl being in charge but slowly finds himself falling in love with her.... 
However there are obstacles to be faced by both of them.
A simple story that will lead you on reading until the very end.



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Louis is a graduate and typically, people know what they want to do after they graduate. Not Louis. Louis stayed the same as he always was. He would always use his dad's card whenever he wanted to go out and shop and he would just post steamy photos on his social media. His friends even think of him as a slacker and all Louis would say is that his family is always going to give him what he wants. That is until his dad has had enough with his son's laziness and forced Louis to do some job hunting. He even warned his son that if he doesn't have a job by the time his 18th birthday comes around, he can kiss his dream car goodbye and there would be no gifts waiting for him. His dad would help him with the task too and Louis just thought that his dad would get him job interviews at the most easiest job well known. But that thought was wrong on so many levels. Because his dad got him a job interview to become the assistant of Harry, Edward, and Marcel Styles. The top three well known business men around the world.