Edaria Online
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Last published Tue, Sep 29, 2015
The world was at the brink of destruction, when mankind found a way to preserve their survival.
However, a young man, who believed that they should pay the price for the world's demise, embarked on a journey in seek of the world and humanity's destruction.
2016-03-14 (UTC) UPDATE:
If anyone may be reading this right now, thank you very much for reading my book, and as a form of my gratitude, I'll resume writing the story after fixing the verb tenses errors and changing the introduction quite a bit. ;)
By the way, it has been two months since I left my country to come to Canada. I also stopped writing Edaria months before that for various reasons.
I'm currently editing Edaria due to a lot of verb tense errors that readers pointed out. You guys don't know how grateful I am for that, so I took some time to understand the complexity of the said tenses. Actually, wow, I find it really hard to write a novel in Third Person Omniscient POV, in past tense. So, I hope I can work it out for the readers (and those who told me to continue writing the novel). Once again, I offer you all my deepest gratitude and wish you well.
~~~A lot of errors, so I'm dropping the book, sorry and thanks to those people who helped me a lot (ideas, edits, suggestion etc.), you guys know yourselves. :)
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