The Moment

Its a short story that I wrote for a stupid English assignment. At first I just wrote it for fun of it but then later on it seemed to make sense. I got a THUMBS UP from a few of my friends. So I posted it here. Your lucky I didn't write about unicorns and cupcakes with sparkles. I mean that would be so cool right? Nobody but 5-year olds would appreciate that. Stop reading all this and go read the story. I assure you it's better than the description. And please give me a feed back on whether I should continue writing or......you know what I mean. Smile :D
And Oh! Yeah BURRITO! Why Burrito? Because they are delicious. ;)