He is so gorgeous, if only he would ever notice me.
I'm the shy and quiet girl in school. I'm the smart girl in the advanced classes with only a few friends. I've never had a boy talk to me, other than someone asking me for help. I've never even thought it would be possible for me to have a boyfriend, for a boy to ever even like me.
I've always dreamed of a guy finally talking to me, of a guy asking me out. But no guy has ever noticed me in this school, they all think of me as the girl in the back who is really smart. They would never think about asking me out. Then something different happened to me. Something that will change my life.
There's a new guy at my school, Luke. He is very handsome, six feet tall, stunning blue eyes, and blonde hair. He is the first guy who I have ever really wanted to pay attention to me. But he is going to be in the popular group, while I'm the girl that nobody notices. He would never notice me.
So what happens when we are seated together in class? Will he take any notice of me, will he talk to me? Or will he ignore me until he needs something, like every other boy has? Will he be any different? Will he be the one that finally saves me? Or will he be the one that finally breaks me?
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As Claire aims to leave her oppressive stepfamily behind, she befriends Zion. Will he be her ticket to freedom or a distraction in achieving her dreams?
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Claire Olsen has had a crush on Zion Petrakis since the first time she laid eyes on him, but he never noticed, instead only having eyes on the school's it girl, Maddie Jennings. Knowing she couldn't compete with Maddie, Claire hid her feelings for Zion, satisfied with admiring him from afar. However, when a series of events led Claire closer to Zion, her feelings for him grew from infatuation to love. And despite fighting hard to keep her feelings contained by distancing herself from Zion, he was determined to show her that he's earned a spot in her life.
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