A Broken Promise
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Last published Wed, Aug 12, 2015
Tobias made Tris a promise, but sometimes they need to be broken. Tris finds herself in a situation they can't explain. She is shocked and distraught, there is only one person she knows she can run too. Uriah.
Veronica Roth owns all her characters. If they sound new then they are mine. I took over for the original author, all is the same except for a few parts.
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