Being strange is your Strength

As we walked by her I felt different. I felt like I’m different person and for the first time I wanted to talk to somebody. And this was a special moment because that person was a girl. I have never talked to girl before. I don’t know if I will ever see her again and I was really scared about that. I must introduce myself to her. So with the hope that I could meet her another time we went to the bus to go home. It was evening already.

I have started to write a story, but I'm still a beginner and this work isn't near finish. So it would be nice to get some advice of what others think of this and if I should even continue to write.