Fighting What's Right
authormelinaturner
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  • Reads 62
  • Votes 1
  • Parts 17
  • Time 2h 44m
authormelinaturner
Ongoing, First published Aug 15, 2015
actiondystopianfaeryfantasyhorror
book 1 in the Faery Dystopian Series.

We have decided to post the original draft beginning with the original draft ending. and see what readers think. As the author if this piece, I can say it is a finished draft at 76K but I have mixed emotions on it. My beta readers have stated it is a disaster and I am torn between scrapping the series altogether or trying to fix it. But I do not know where to start. So I thought maybe I would post both original drafts together. yes, the untouched version and the readers can help me find its flaws. So that I can fix it and publish it.

of coarse once it is fixed, I will upload the updated versión for you guys to read and enjoy.
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