A Big Mistake..(On hold)
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Last published Mon, May 27, 2013
A normal girl. A typical Bad boy. What happens when they cross path of twist and turns? Is it going to be common story or a big shocker? duh duh duhh... ~~~~~~~~~ A Horrible Past. These 3 words changed Valerie's life dramaticly. They compelled her to look at the rusty mirror in hatered and diapproval, everyone glanced at her that way. After what happened she blocked her self away from anything with a beating heart, anything that could provide her happiness. Especially, anyone she cared about, due to her they would get hurt in the end anyway. She didn't let them in and they didn't try. Perfect combination eh? And she was absolutely okay with that, it was accepted by now. But, the small, annoying part within her refused to let hope die. It desired to live the incrediable life she wants had, to embrace her ex-bestfriend tightly again -who was now a full-time slut, to share the most deepest thoughts with someone. To love and to be loved back. She confidently knew those dreams would never knock back into reality. It was to much to ask for when her past clings onto her tightly, declining to leave. Valerie has got no other choice but to be left alone. Alone on the table, alone at lunch, alone at home. She's destined to be left alone. But, the questions here are. What everyone blabbers on about, is it true? Can a regretful past really change a person, forever? Or will a mysteries, beautiful, stubborn, lonely, new boy add more turns to her rollercoaster life? ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ This definitely isn't of those 'two characters instantly fall in love' type of story nuhh uhh, they have a very deep storyline to follow. This will be fun to write ;) Vote. Comment. Fan. Ideas. Please? -TheGirl_x <3
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