Barely Legal
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MatureOngoing1h 11m
Last published Sat, Dec 17, 2016
When a psychopathic shooter steals Cara Salvatore's wallet and tries to kill her, she has to do all she can to stay away from him. Cara calls the cops after hearing gunshots near the hospital parking lot, little did she know that she was right next to the shooter. The killer goes after Cara and her best friend, Grayson.
Cara and Grayson go to places they've never been before and meet new people that help them along the way. They face many obstacles, but still manage to stay away from the psycho. How long do they have to keep running from this guy? Will this psychopath ever get caught by the police?
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