Losing weight

Hey guys.I want to write a story about a girl try to lose her weight.Actually, I also trying to lose my weight now but actually, it didn't seem like I become thinner.And, I apologize about my poor grammar because I am a Chinese and I really trying to improve my English.lol.Sorry for telling you guys so many useless things,haha.Yeah, as I said, my story is about losing weight and I will write the opening on the first chapter, if you love it, give me a comment and tell me to continue. If you don't like it, please give me a comment too, because I really want to improve my English,haha.By the way, thank you for choosing this book to read.