The Black Rosalix
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Última atualização ter, ago 18, 2015
A fantasy I'm making. (update really slow)
this is my first book(hopefully) so constructive criticism is welcomed.
i'll do the description of the story a bit later on, since I'm still not that sure where I want it to go.
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