Liar-Man's Critiquing Station
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Ongoing, First published Aug 18, 2015
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hello guys! #this is my first story and English is not my first language so if I have made any mistake then plz forgive me 🙏🏻 𝐦𝐚𝐲𝐫𝐚 -𝐦𝐚𝐲𝐫𝐚 𝐢𝐬 𝐚 𝐠𝐢𝐫𝐥 𝐟𝐮𝐥𝐥 𝐨𝐟 𝐥𝐢𝐟𝐞 𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐛𝐞𝐥𝐨𝐧𝐠𝐬 𝐟𝐫𝐨𝐦 𝐚 𝐫𝐢𝐜𝐡 𝐟𝐚𝐦𝐢𝐥𝐲.𝐬𝐡𝐞 𝐢𝐬 𝐟𝐚𝐦𝐨𝐮𝐬 𝐭𝐨 𝐞𝐯𝐞𝐫𝐲𝐨𝐧𝐞 𝐟𝐨𝐫 𝐡𝐞𝐫 𝐛𝐚𝐝𝐚𝐬𝐬𝐧𝐞𝐬𝐬 ..... 𝐀𝐝𝐢- 𝐚𝐝𝐢 𝐚𝐥𝐬𝐨 𝐛𝐞𝐥𝐨𝐧𝐠𝐬 𝐟𝐫𝐨𝐦 𝐚 𝐫𝐢𝐜𝐡 𝐟𝐚𝐦𝐢𝐥𝐲.𝐡𝐞 𝐢𝐬 𝐥𝐨𝐯𝐚𝐛𝐥𝐞 𝐩𝐞𝐫𝐬𝐨𝐧 . 𝐥𝐢𝐯𝐞 𝐡𝐢𝐬 𝐨𝐰𝐧 𝐥𝐢𝐟𝐞 𝐢𝐧 𝐡𝐢𝐬 𝐨𝐰𝐧 𝐰𝐚𝐲𝐲...... 𝐚𝐬𝐡𝐨𝐤𝐚 -𝐦𝐚𝐲𝐫𝐚𝐬 𝐦𝐨𝐦 𝐚𝐬𝐡𝐨𝐤𝐚 𝐢𝐬 𝐬𝐨𝐨 𝐦𝐮𝐜𝐡 𝐥𝐨𝐯𝐞𝐥𝐲 𝐥𝐚𝐝𝐲.𝐛𝐮𝐭 𝐬𝐡𝐞 𝐟𝐞𝐥𝐭 𝐫𝐞𝐬𝐭𝐥𝐞𝐬𝐬 𝐟𝐨𝐫 𝐡𝐞𝐫 𝐨𝐧𝐥𝐲 𝐝𝐚𝐮𝐠𝐡𝐭𝐞𝐫 𝐰𝐡𝐨 𝐢𝐬 𝐚 𝐭𝐫𝐨𝐮𝐛𝐥𝐞𝐦𝐚𝐤𝐞𝐫 . 𝐬𝐡𝐞 𝐥𝐨𝐯𝐞𝐬 𝐚𝐝𝐢 𝐥𝐢𝐤𝐞 𝐡𝐞𝐫 𝐨𝐰𝐧 𝐬𝐨𝐧 𝐰𝐡𝐢𝐜𝐡 𝐦𝐚𝐤𝐞𝐬 𝐦𝐚𝐲𝐫𝐚 𝐣𝐞𝐚𝐥𝐨𝐮𝐬 𝐚𝐥𝐥 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐭𝐢𝐦𝐞. 𝐯𝐢𝐧𝐨𝐝- 𝐦𝐚𝐲𝐫𝐚𝐬 𝐝𝐚𝐝 𝐯𝐢𝐧𝐨𝐝 𝐢𝐬 𝐚 𝐝𝐨𝐜𝐭𝐨𝐫 𝐰𝐡𝐨 𝐢𝐬 𝐬𝐨𝐨 𝐢𝐧𝐧𝐨𝐜𝐞𝐧𝐭 . 𝐰𝐡𝐞𝐧𝐞𝐯𝐞𝐫 𝐡𝐢𝐬 𝐝𝐚𝐮𝐠𝐡𝐭𝐞𝐫 𝐦𝐚𝐤𝐞𝐬 𝐚𝐧𝐲 𝐭𝐫𝐨𝐮𝐛𝐥𝐞𝐬 𝐡𝐞 𝐚𝐥𝐰𝐚𝐲𝐬 𝐩𝐫𝐨𝐭𝐞𝐜𝐭 𝐡𝐢𝐬 𝐝𝐚𝐮𝐠𝐡𝐭𝐞𝐫 𝐟𝐫𝐨𝐦 𝐡𝐢𝐬 𝐰𝐢𝐟𝐞 𝐜𝐳
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Status: Complete Beautiful and passionate boss lady as I'm, I never thought one's love will make me frail. It wasn't a love at first sight as they say but it was love at first quarrel. I and my sister fighting over the love of a handsome young man, luckily I was chose but my sister doesn't want to let go. ~~~~~ For her, the battle was a loosed one but she never gave up. I died for years hoping she would cherish him but she moved on "without him". Returning from death after so many years, I still yearned and choose him again then my sister made a second turn. In such a battle for love, who will win and who will be choose? #4 on thewatty2021