The Italian Devil One Shot

This is a one shot of The Italian Devil. And hence has only one chapter. I would like to say I'm not a pro at writing. Therefore criticism is welcomed with open arms. But please make sure you are not too rude.
This one shot doesn't focus on Marco's and Ophelia's love life. It is a kinda closure to the past events. I haven't written it in Marco's or Ophelia's P.O.V because the way they speak can only be portrayed by one writer, Natalie Hart herself.
This might start a bit confusingly, but as you reach the 'heart of the story'- as I like to call it- all your confusion gets sorted out.
Enjoy....!