the visit
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Last published Thu, Aug 20, 2015
one morning a girl named Mia and her brother drew sat a the table eating there food there mom says she has to go on a work trip with there father thy have t fly 3000 miles away to visit their grandma and grandpa for the first time. you when do we leave said drew, tommorow said their mom said so they went to bed and woke up at the crack of dawn. crap! says mia I still have to pack. and do my makeup and get to the airport by 10:30.meanwhile drew is all done packing and is ready to leave
20 minutes later they leave .when they get there they are glad to meet there grandparents first they go over the rules
1.eat all you want
2.always say goodnight
3.never leave your room past 8:00pm
they got there at 4:30 so with only a few hours left they explore the area then go to sleep.
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