Outlier

Outlier

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WpMetadataNoticeLast published Fri, Aug 21, 2015
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Science Fiction
After a major war that leaves the world in shambles , society rebuilds itself and the newborn are genetically altered to not feel. On the contrary, they feel as if differences and emotion start the wars. Feeling isn't allowed, but people base their patterns on what other people do , so when Maxine starts to feel, it scares her. Garret is punished for Attie's mistake on going past the fringe. It was always a mystery why they wanted no-one past the border. Curiousity is apart of human nature, but so is pain. The sentinel then admit a undercover to retrieve the outcasts of their society, the feelers in their compound, the mistakes. That is when Maxine meets Dimitri, someone whom she swears she had come across before, even though she knows he is related in someway to the authoritives, his defiance seems to enchant her. She can't trust him to tell her little secret of how emotions have cursed her bloodstream, she is still jealous of the things that he is courageous enough to do that she can't. After she finds him sneaking out every night, breaking the restrictions, she decides to start following him. She gets a growing suspicion that he feels, but he is still hiding more things from her, so is she. So it seems one night so are the authoritives. Secrets of what they do, so big, they might just break her society apart.
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I wrote this for EVERYONE. To appeal to anyone that reads ANY genre. It combines almost all of them. It's an introduction to the Worlds of Within universe. When you get to the action parts (which doesn't take long) you should be invested enough to want to unravel the mysteries and enjoy its intrigue... The flood is raging. A terrifying, heartless mountain of water, swallowing the world . The tunnel networks? Of course, that won't save them. The forests? Like leaves in a breeze. The lookout towers and trade hubs? Gone. Washed clean. Every home, every last trace of what once was. Gamleon is the first to see it ... and survive. His mind is near collapse, his heart broken. He runs. What would YOU do? What could anyone do? Some scrape by in a mythological setting of beasts and medieval men. Cruel, literally cold-blooded Gorgon hordes enforce an absolute rule slithering in the tunnels beneath the feet of every kingdom. There is an isolated, forgotten place. A cavern, magnificent and vast, older than civilization. A place where the weird and the unwanted might ride out this cataclysm if Gamleon can stay alive long enough to get them there.. In this special place, something incredible, cut off from the outside, lurks. Something... you won't be ready for or ever expect. Gamleon, our weary adventurer, is a paradox: terrifying to some perhaps, yet his heart and intent is helpful, with a quiet dignity bordering on noble, intimidating and innately intelligent. The only way back out is to navigate the Gorgon tunnels. Join him, won't you ? Share his inner thoughts . See and feel how they help us all learn how to persist and triumph in spite of a world where everything is stacked against us. ( sound familiar, it should.) Join him and be swept away as he encounters or invents never-before-seen innovations and outrageous challenges. Dignity meets hope. Self-respect shines beyond courage. Welcome my friend to the Worlds of Within.

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