The Twining

The Twining

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WpMetadataNoticeLast published Fri, Aug 21, 2015
The narrative centres upon the thoughts, feelings and experiences of the protagonists (husband and wife Morton and Hattie in their early thirties) in a series of short chapters which alternate between the developing present and a series of flashbacks from the past. A seemingly enviable couple, they begin to experience doubts and uncertainties towards one another’s and indeed their own respective capabilities of siring or conceiving a child for which there are no apparent explicable medical reasons. These concerns cause Morton to reflect upon a past demeanour as a reason for a possible karmic punishment. A pregnancy manifests arbitrarily against expectations and produces an exquisite and charming little daughter who possesses somewhat unique physical and behavioural characteristics that make her quite remarkable and distinguishable. Yet the child develops a terminal illness... The narrative develops to the point where the child, conscious of her own mortality and time left, makes a chilling prediction to reassure and comfort her parents who nonetheless succumb to sevre grief at her passing. The plot develops to show the affects of the girl’s death upon her parents, relatives and the family pet. At the funeral service, there is a modern gothic experience which foreshadows the twist in the resolution of the narrative. The couple attempt to move on with their lives, albeit gingerly and find different ways of dealing with their grief. As the pain of grief subsides, there emerges an unexpected but anxious pregnancy and the couples’ trepidation intensifies with fears that a congenital disorder could repeat itself. Another daughter is born with disturbingly similar physical and behavioural congruities and juxtapositions that strike many, particular family members to comment. Despite parental fears, the child develops healthily yet displays an uncanny knowledge of experiences of which she should know nothing about…
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Emmy Lorraine is living her life exactly the way she wants to - owning and running her quaint coffee shop, The Coffee Bean, and enjoying her solitary, peaceful adult life - no strings attached, and certainly no unwanted communication with her pushy, controlling parents. But a recent fling with a man she barely knows has left her in a predicament that she never could have predicted. Pregnant and single, Emmy has to face the biggest hurdle of her life, and when Ben McAllister suddenly comes back into the picture, she really doesn't know how to reconcile her fierce independent nature with her constant, inconvenient attraction to him. Add to the complicated mess the ghost that haunts her coffee shop, and Emmy's life really takes a turn for the confusing. The ghost seems to be trying to communicate with her, but at her failure to grasp its meaning, the haunting becomes more intense, forcing her to reconsider the future of The Coffee Bean - her livelihood. As her relationship with Ben progresses into something she'd never expected, Emmy fights her own natural instincts to back away, to get away from the confusion and chaos inside her heart. But as much as she'd like to think she can handle everything on her own, it's Ben's arms that she really wants to fall into at the end of each day. And as they begin to work together to solve The Coffee Bean's problems, to prepare for a child that neither of them expected to have, they find themselves pushed closer and closer together than either of them had imagined. With the unexpected arrival of Emmy's parents, whom she hasn't spoken to in nearly ten years, comes further complications - questions and anxieties that could break Emmy and Ben apart for good. But the ghost at The Coffee Bean isn't finished with them yet, and as they uncover the meaning of her haunting and communication, they learn more about their own relationship. Emmy might just realize that her heart really can open to Ben more than she'd ever wanted to believe.

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