The Makeover
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Nerdy girls are usually weird. Valentina Brown is the weirdest of the weird girl in St. Rocks high school. She is all the teacher's pet. A down to earth and a simple person. But, her friends and the whole nerd group decides to change this shy, good, quiet girl into a total social girl. Join this girl in her jolly school adventure, where she experiences all the school and teenage stuff and how her life is turned upside down after she is forced to make friends with the jocks whom she hates the most.
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